Language Arts
Unbroken Essay
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This extraordinary, moving and exhilarating novel named, Unbroken was crafted by the author Laura Hillenbrand. Ms. Hillenbrand dedicated 10, long years of her life constructing this story of a young man named Louie, a former Olympian sprinter, going through alarming encounters throughout his time at war. She sculpted his life and experiences vividly, making sure to explain to people everything he went through, and most of these were events most couldn’t even imagine. Laura let his legacy live on through this book. This woman was able to let everyone imagine his pain, what was going on in his mind, and how he survived throughout this novel, all his hardships brought to life. Many wonder why she was so connected to his story, and why Laura dedicated such a huge chunk of her life to telling his story. Well, everyone goes through terrifying experiences in their life, some more than others. Hillenbrand was one of these people, suffering through something more than what we know about, she found Louie as someone to relate to. Although, they may have been in totally different situations through their experiences, there was something similar about their pain that she could see. Something that probably reminded her that she was not alone. Unbroken; a word to explain someone who has gone through so much pain and torture, but didn’t let this destroy them. Louie, endured the worst of the worst, eventually able to move on, in some way from all this and continue on with his life. Louie Zamperini is in fact, an unbroken man.
Louie Zamperini in his youth, was a young mischievous boy, always causing trouble. This was until his brother Pete wanted him to make something of his life. At a young age, Pete motivated Louie into running, finding that he could do something with this skill rather than running from the cops. Louie found something exceptional to do with his talent. Exceeding on through the years, he was breaking records and eventually found himself on the path to the summer olympics. After this chapter passed in his life, Zamperini joined the Army Air Force. Through many successful things in his life, no one would have thought that this next event would play out in his life. A day flying in the Green Hornet, Louie and his crew crashed into the ocean. This is when it started it all, all the worst things Louie experienced in his life would lead from this day on. From there on, drifting for 47, torturous days along with Phil who had survived the crash and being lost at sea, they eventually got captured by the Japanese. The guards who held him and one in particular ‘The Bird’ beat him mercilessly, starved him and took away everything, dehumanizing him. He fought through everything, eventually having been returned to America soon after the war. His fight was not over, for years he suffered from alcoholism and was slowly falling into something worse than what people knew Louie of. Louie was turning into a man his wife couldn’t and wouldn’t recognize. God saved him, belief saved him. He got his life together and dedicated parts of his life to faith. The war did not break him, he was a free man, a free soul and he was going to be okay.
The bird was a man who put Louie through excruciating mental and physical pain during his days in Japan as a POW. Louie somehow wanted to forgive his captures, after everything they put him through, Louie chose forgiveness as his path to growing as a new man and moving on. This was a way for Louie to release his soul from everything that happened to him. Eventually learning that the bird was alive, Louie wanted to see his capture for the first time since the war. The bird however didn’t agree with this idea and refused to meet with him. Maybe, the bird didn’t want to meet with him because of a few reasons. The bird didn’t want to confront things that he did in his past, he had a belief that he had done nothing wrong in the war, thinking of himself as a good man. If he had met with Louie I have an idea that everything that he had done during the war would come back to him and potentially break him. For the rest of his life he wants to believe he is a good man and won’t confront what he did. The bird wouldn’t meet with Louie due to the simple fact that he doesn’t want to face his past.
Louie was in need for a release from his pain, and he found his release through forgiveness. At first he thought that in order to get his life back in order he would need to get revenge. He found that forgiveness let his soul release from this pain. He forgave those who gave him pain as a way to rise up, this showed them that he is more than just a man who got captured and lived through it, he is an extraordinary human being capable of good things. He chose this path, and it proved to everyone that he could get through everything that was going wrong in his life, he saved himself.
Louie is in definition, unbroken. He is strong in ways that not everyone can be. At times maybe he was a little broken but he found solutions and ways to get through bad times, these were his glue. As a young man he always held hope and he kept that going through the rest of his life. He had faith in god and that there was a plan laid out for him. Louie learned forgiveness, something that not most people would be able to hold onto after what he went through. He is an unbroken man and Laura Hillenbrand did an excellent job of expressing who he was and everything he stood for. She understood him, and this helped her relate and write his story. Louie Zamperini holds an incredible story.
In language arts this year we read the novel Unbroken. This novel is about the olympian and POW, Louie Zamperini. We wrote an expository essay about him and his story after we were finished with this novel. We got to write our theories on this book and events that happened to him. Through this entire period of reading the book I got to know Louie and what he went through, this book was truly amazing and moving. In this essay I tried my best to describe Louies life and what I think happened to him. I am really proud of this essay because of how I wrote this and the ways I described Louie's life.
Louie Zamperini Poem
Forgiveness
A way we shed our sins of hate
Because we are fearless
In ways that are great
Although you may have struck me
For those actions won't be forgotten
I decided not to flee
Because my hearts not rotten
I understand
Your country's
views
From a land
That abuse
During a dark
time
Light was not
shown
It was filled with
grime
I was not alone
You held your whip
Showed no mercy
Let me trip
There was no
controversy
On the other
hand
I set mine down
For my stand
I turned around
I chose forgiven-
ess
To relieve your
duties
We yet to have
unfinished
Business
This is not a
movie
This path was
chosen
So that we are
allowed to
heal
Our past is not
frozen
We no longer
have
to conceal
God has given us
the chance
To relieve our
pain
Let's take a
dance
And let this drain
But the memories
won’t erase
Now they begin to
Fade
We are now in a
better place
Our battle is
outweighed
God help us all
Forgive our daring
sins
We don’t want to
apoll
For then we won't grin
Written by
Morgan MacDonald
And
Miranda Crumm
My partner and I wrote this poem about Louie zamperini. We wanted to write this poem to show in a graceful way all the hardships he went through and what he did to overcome them. Our teacher gave us the option of doing a project and we got to choose what we wanted to make. We chose a poem because we thought that the topic of forgiveness best suited this type of writing.
We explained him and his “enemy” the Bird through the entire poem. We tried to express why Louie wanted to forgive his captures and how this affected his life. Although Louie never forgave Bird due to him not wanting to meet with Louie, we tried to explain how he forgave the other captures. This is my best work because I used the art of poetry and literature to express a person's feelings and their entire life.